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April 24th, 2015, 7:22 pm

Blizzard

Milestone Question

So Hi everyone, I'm sure you notice that I have now posted 10 pages, and I just want to ask something. If I am doing anything wrong with this comic please let me know, I really want to improve on this. If you have any suggestions please let me know through comments, PM, or even Skype. Thank you for reading! :D

(Also I want to thank all 32 of my fans, you have no idea how happy you make me :D)

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April 25th, 2015, 2:22 pm

Sapar

Personally, my only real complaint is the dialogue. It kinda seems forced at times, and sometimes it feels like a character said something because they were supposed to, rather than because it's something they would naturally say.

Everything else is pretty good, though. The visuals are nice, and the personalities are shown well enough (though, they'd be clearer without the aforementioned dialogue.)

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April 25th, 2015, 3:13 pm

ThatOneSpriter

Sometimes the text bubbles seem to cover the characters. While it's not annoying, some others might not like it.

Expressions are really good so keep those and the effects are nice!

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April 25th, 2015, 3:30 pm

Blizzard

Thank you both for your insight! I will try and apply them as much as possible in future pages.

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